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the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

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The diagram illustrates the plastic bottles recycling process. Overall, there are nine steps of recycling, starting with throwing bottles and ending with new products. In the first step people throw away plastic bottles, then this bottles collect and sent to recycling centre, where before compressing into blocks bottles are sorting. Bottles which can be recycled crushing and washing. After this plastic pellets are producing and heating to form raw materials. Finally, from raw materials produce new products.
The diagram illustrates the plastic
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recycling process.
Overall
, there are nine steps of recycling, starting with throwing
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bottles
and ending with new products. In the
first
step
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people
throw away plastic
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, then this
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collect and
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sent
to recycling
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centre
, where
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before
compressing into blocks
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bottles
are sorting.
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which can
be recycled
crushing and washing. After this plastic pellets are producing and heating to form raw materials.
Finally
, from raw materials produce new products.
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