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The charts compare the proportion of energy produced by different sources in France in 1995 and 2005.

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The charts compare the proportion of energy produced by different sources in France in 1995 and 2005. It is clear that the proportion of energy generated by petrol decreased, while the figures for the rest of energy sources had an opposite trend. Also, coal and gas were the most significant sources of energy in both years. In 1995, energy produced by coal accounted for the highest proportion, at 29. 80% of the total energy production in France. The figures for Gas and Petro were slightly lower, at 29. 63% and 29. 27% respectively. Meanwhile, only 6. 40% of the total energy was generated by Nuclear and the lowest figure can be seen in the percentage of energy produced by other sources, at nearly 5%. In 2005, the percentage of energy from Coal went up insignificantly but remained the highest figure in the chart, at 30. 93%. The figure for Gas rose slowly to 30. 31%, while that for Petrol experienced a dramatic fall of nearly 10%. There were sharp increases to 10. 10% and 9. 10% in the figures for Nuclear and Other sources respectively.
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in France in 1995 and 2005.

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produced by coal accounted for the highest proportion, at 29. 80% of the total
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production in France. The
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remained the highest
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in the chart, at 30. 93%. The
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