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The process diagram illustrates the information about how cement is produced as well as concrete production.

The process diagram illustrates the information about how cement is produced as well as concrete production. DY5R6
The process diagram illustrates the information about how cement is produced as well as concrete production. In first picture, Firstly, take limestone, and clay crack it through a crusher then you get a powder type material. Next, you pass this powder through a mixer after passing mixer this material goes to a rotating heater where this material mix well as well as in the same time heat is also applied below a rotating heater. After that, take out the mixture to a rotating heater, then grind this mixture with the help of grinder. Finally, you get a cement, and pour it into a bags. In latter process, concrete production, first you make a mixture of cement, water, sand, and gravel. You only take a 10% water, 25% sand, 15% cement, and 50% gravel basically gravel is small stones, then pour them into a concrete mixer. Now your concrete mixture is ready.
The process diagram illustrates the information about how
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cement
is produced
as well
as concrete production.

In
first
picture,
Firstly
, take limestone, and clay crack it through a crusher then you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a powder type material.
Next
, you pass this powder through a mixer after passing mixer this material goes to a rotating heater where this material mix well
as well
as in the same time heat is
also
applied below a rotating heater. After that, take out the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mixture
to a rotating heater, then grind this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mixture
with the
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help
of grinder.
Finally
, you
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get
a
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cement
, and pour it into a bags.

In latter process, concrete production,
first
you
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make
a
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mixture
of
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cement
, water, sand, and gravel. You
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only
take a 10% water, 25% sand, 15%
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cement
, and 50% gravel
basically
gravel is
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small
stones, then pour them into a concrete mixer.
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Now
your concrete
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mixture
is ready.
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IELTS academic The process diagram illustrates the information about how cement is produced as well as concrete production.

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6.5
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