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THE BAR CHART AND PIE CHART BELOW SHOW THAT THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER CONSUMPTION AND RESIDENTIAL WATER USAGE IN AUSTRALIA BETWEEN 2004.

THE BAR CHART AND PIE CHART BELOW SHOW THAT THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER CONSUMPTION AND RESIDENTIAL WATER USAGE IN AUSTRALIA BETWEEN 2004. KVOa6
THE PIE CHART AND BAR CHART ILLUSTRATE THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH AVERAGE OF WATER CONSUMPTION AND RESIDENTIAL WATER USAGE IN AUSTRALIA OVER A PERIOD OF 2004. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE PIE CHART THAT THE RATIO OF RESIDENTIAL HOUSES WATER CONSUMPTION WAS THE HIGHEST AMONG OTHER WATER CONSUMPTIONS, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF OTHERS WATER CONSUMPTION WAS THE LOWEST LIKEWISE, THE BAR GRAPH THAT THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER USAGE IN BATHROOM WAS THE HIGHEST, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF WATER USAGE IN KITCHEN WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 6% WATER CONSUMPTION IN GOVERNMENT. ALTHOUGH AUSTRALIA HAD ONLY 3% WATER CONSUMPTION IN OTHERS WHILE, THE QUANTITY OF WATER CONSUMPTION IN RESIDENTIAL HOUSES WAS THE HIGH CONSEQUENTLY, 57% WATER CONSUMPTION IN AUSTRALIA IN 2004 LIKEWISE, THE AVERAGE OF WATER CONSUMPTION IN RESIDENTIAL APPARTMENTS WAS 13% AND 11% IN INDUSTRY THENCE 10% WATER CONSUMPTION IN BUSINESS IN 2004. MOREOVER, 15% WATER USAGE IN TOILETS AND ONLY 10% WATER USAGE IN KITCHEN COMPARABLY, THE NUMERAL OF WATER USAGE IN BATHROOM WAS THE TALLEST THAT'S WHY THE 28% WATER USAGE IN BATHROOM AND 2ND GROWEST VALUE OF WATER CONSUMPTION IN GARDEN SO THAT THE 27% WATER USAGE IN GARDEN HENCE 20% WATER USAGE IN WASHING CLOTHES.
THE PIE CHART AND BAR CHART ILLUSTRATE THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH AVERAGE OF
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