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the diagram gives the information about the process of receyled the glass bottles.

the diagram gives the information about the process of receyled the glass bottles. 7PYmk

The diagram depicts the information about the how waste glass bottles are receyled in the factory. After analyze the data, it can be seen clearly that, in the initial stage from the collection point, wasted glass bottles are collected thought the transportation such as van and trucks. In the second stage, these collected bottles are washed with high pressure water by the machine After that, bottles are transfered to glass factory for further step. Moving further, in the factory, glass bottles are crashed by the machine and made glass into small pieces. Next, these glass pieces are burned in furnace with the heat of 600 to 800 degree calcus. After, glass bottles are take shaped with the help of mould. In the final stage, bottles are filled with soft drinks. At the end these bottles are ready for sale in the market. Overall, the process of making glass bottles are simple which includes three stages. Omission of one single step halt the whole process.

The diagram depicts the information about Did you mean "how"?how
the how
 waste You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
 are Possible spelling mistake found.recalledregaled
receyled
 in the factory.

After analyze the data, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
clearly
 that, in the initial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 from the collection point, wasted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
are collected
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 the transportation such as van and trucks. In the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, these collected You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
are washed
 with high pressure water by the machine

After that, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
 are Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "transferred", the past tense form of the verb 'transfer'?transferredtransferee
transfered
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 factory for further
 step.

Moving further
, in the factory, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
are crashed
 by the machine and made You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 pieces. Next
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 pieces are burned
 in furnace with the heat of 600 to 800 degree Possible spelling mistake found.caucuscallus
calcus
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
 are take shaped with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
. In the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
are filled
 with soft drinks. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
 are ready for sale in the market.

Overall
, the process of making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
 are simple which includes three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
. Omission of one single step halt the whole process. 