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The given figure illustrates the predicted couple of car production in four industrial territories such as China, the UK, Japan, and the USA over a 15-year period

The given figure illustrates the predicted couple of car production in four industrial territories such as China, the UK, Japan, and the USA over a 15-year period XygM8

The given figure illustrates the predicted couple of car production in four industrial territories such as China, the UK, Japan, and the USA over a 15-year period. It can be seen from the graph that the line graph divides into two branches which are raising line- China and declining aspect including Japan, the UK, the USA. To begin with the car production in 3 dipping countries, car manufacturing in the USA starts at 300 hundreds of thousands, the number of cars will be made is set to dip dramatically by 2035. The first productions in the UK are less than the USA approximately 100 hundreds of thousands, it is predicted to hit the lowest point( nearly 50 hundreds of thousands) in over a 10-year. Although Japan is the highest country at first, it shows some fluctuation which is the same trend as the USA. Furthermore, whereas manufacturing in China does not start at a high position(it is similar to the lowest point of Japan), it is anticipated to be a steady change in car production year by year. Apart from the 3 introduced territories, China is not in a decreasing way, it is anticipated that from 2025 onward, manufacturing will have peaked.

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