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Percentage of single men in

Percentage of single men in 30Nmn

The line graph illustrates the rate of unmarried men of three countries America, Vietnam and China over 20 years. In common, the proportion rose rapidly and obviously it can be seen that percentage of Vietnam was by far the highest. In 2000, the rate of American single adult had been highest at 10 percent but it dipped minimally over 5 years. In contrary, starting at 5% China’s went up moderately and Vietnam’s remained almost constant in 2005. An upward trend was seen over 10 years, the percentage of single men of Vietnam stood out as the peak at 25%. America’s ascended continually at most 20%. China reached at 15% after decreasing in 2015.

The line graph illustrates the rate of unmarried This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 of three countries America, Vietnam and China over 20 years. In common, the proportion rose rapidly
 and obviously
 it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that percentage of Vietnam was by far the highest.

In 2000, the rate of American single adult had been highest at 10 percent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it dipped minimally
 over 5 years. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 contrary, starting at 5% China’s went up moderately
 and Vietnam’s remained almost constant in 2005.

An upward trend was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 over 10 years, the percentage of single This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 of Vietnam stood out as the peak at 25%. America’s ascended continually
 at most 20%. China reached at 15% after decreasing in 2015. 