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the diagram below shows how rainwater is reused. summarize the informtion and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relavant

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The diagram illustrates recycle system of rainwater from how it transfers into tap water for household usage to treated wastewater that release into rivers or streams finally. First of all, rainwater recycling process contains three main stage, beginning with collect rainwater by dams or household tanks. While tap water from private tank collected can be used directly, stream water from dam collected must go through treatment plant to purify microorganism or heavy metals in order to meet the quality demand of citizen. After being used by various activities, wastewater is piped to another wastewater treatment system to clean and level up that wastewater stream. From this step, depending on water quality, the one with higher standard can be supplied back to household usage, on the contrary and eventually, the lower grade water quality which is called “treated water” will be pipe out the nearest river along with treated stomwater

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 for household usage to treated wastewater that release into rivers or streams finally
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water
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used
directly
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water
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must
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meet
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used
 by various activities, wastewater is piped
 to another wastewater treatment system to clean and level up that wastewater stream. From this step, depending on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 quality, the one with higher standard can be supplied
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 and eventually
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water
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