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The bar graph below show the top 10 détinations for Áutralian residents in the year 2000/2001 and 2010/2011

The bar graph below show the top 10 détinations for Áutralian residents in the year 2000/2001 and 2010/2011 eEVaK

The given bar chart reveals the proportion of top ten destinations that Australian citizens visited between 2000/2001 and 2010/2011. The data collected was in terms of percentage and categorized into ten places: New Zealand, Indonesia, US, Thailand, the UK, China, Fiji, Singapore, Malaysia and Hong Kong. Generally, New Zealand had the most Australian visit enduring the time survey In details, in 2000/2001, as we see from the chart, the highest position was for the figure for New Zealand, proved at 16 percent. Then, the ratio was immediately followed by the figure for US, visualized at 12 percent. The gap between two figures for Indonesia and the UK was minimal, at only 2 percent. Then, the ratio for Hong Kong was 2 times higher than the figure for Singapore, illustrated at 5 percent compared to 3 percent. Finally, the statistics for Fiji took a share of 2 percent which was the lowest position. On the other hand, as for the year of 2010/2011, there were various fluctuations. Obviously, the figure for New Zealand fell to 14 percent, still earning the highest position, while the figure for Hong Kong fell to 3 percent, becoming the lowest position. Besides, there were upward trends in the figures for Indonesia, Thailand, China, Fiji, demonstrated at 11, 7, 5 in turns. Eventually, the figure for the US, the UK, Singapore and Malaysia experienced downward trends (data? ). In brief, New Zealand is always the good choice for Australian citizen in both 2000/2001 and 2010/2011. Furthermore, Australian tended to visit Asia than Europe in 2010/2011 than 2000/2001.

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