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The process chart shows the steps of brick construction for building industry.write a report forma

The process chart shows the steps of brick construction for building industry. write a report forma GJ59w

The chart describes the way through which bricks are formed in an infrastructure industry. Firstly soil is dug with a help of a digger because that is the fundamental ingredient for making bricks. Later on the soil is poured on a metal surface that helps in the cleaning of soil by removing pebbles. The clean sand is then mixed with water and it is moulded in to bricks by using the brick moulders or they are cut into bricks using a brick-cutter wire. After the moulding part bricks are supposed to move in the furnace for the hardness, this part involves roasting the bricks at various temperatures ranging between 200°C and 1300°C. Finally before packing them the bricks are cooled in a huge coolerfor around two to three days. At the end bricks are packed and they are sent out for delivery in big delivery trucks. All in all the brick making procedure is quite complex from the start to the end

The chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 the way through which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are formed
 in an infrastructure industry.

Firstly
 soil is dug
 with a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of a digger This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
that is
 the fundamental ingredient for making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
. Later on the soil is poured
 on a metal surface that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 in the cleaning of soil by removing pebbles. The clean sand is then mixed with water and it is Possible spelling mistake found.moldedmounded
moulded
 in to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 by using the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
brick
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moulders or
 they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 using a brick-cutter wire.

After the Possible spelling mistake. 'moulding' is British English.molding
moulding
 part You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are supposed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 in the furnace for the hardness, this part involves roasting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 at various temperatures ranging between Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "200 °C"200 °C
200°C
 and Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "1300 °C"1300 °C
1300°C
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 packing them the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are cooled
 in a huge Possible spelling mistake found.cooler for
coolerfor
 around two to three days. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).packed, and
packed and
 they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 out for delivery in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 delivery trucks.

All in all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
brick
 making procedure is quite complex from the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end