Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The process chart shows the production of bottles?

The process chart shows the production of bottles? 8LGXB
The process chart shows the information regarding the production of bottles. which involve distinct stages. It can be clearly seen that the process chart start from collection of wasted glass bottles in the houses and many places and sent for transportation. furthermore, bottles are washed with the help of high pressure water. After this step completed it is transferred to glass factory in addition it is a burning in furnace of of 600 to 800 Celsius. Moving further, bottles are replaced into the new liquid glass. subsequently, bottles are shaped in glass with the help of mould Moreover, bottles are done and packed into the truck. Corres pordingly, then juce bottles is ready to be delivered to the supermarket. A part from this product is ready for sale. Overall, in the process chart two stages and all stages are mandatory. In the process chart start the collection of bottles and end the delivered of juce bottles sale in market.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chart
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
the information regarding the production of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
which
involve distinct stages. It can be
clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chart
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
from collection of wasted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
glass
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
places and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
for transportation.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
furthermore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
are washed
with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of high pressure water.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
this step completed it
is transferred
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
glass
factory
in addition
it is a burning in furnace
Possible typo: you repeated a word
of of
600 to 800 Celsius. Moving
further
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
are replaced
into the new liquid
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
glass
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
subsequently
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
are shaped
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
glass
with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of
Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.
mould
Moreover
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
are done
and packed into the truck.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Corres
Possible spelling mistake found.
pordingly
, then
Possible spelling mistake found.
juce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
is ready to
be delivered
to the supermarket. A part from this product is ready for sale.
Overall
, in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chart
two stages and all stages are mandatory. In the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chart
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the collection of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
the delivered of
Possible spelling mistake found.
juce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
sale in market.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The process chart shows the production of bottles?

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts