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The process chart shows the method of publishing a book.

The process chart shows the method of publishing a book. 2RAPj
The assigned process chart illustrates information about the procedure for publishing a book. This process has around 9 steps, initiating from writing and ending at distribution to bookstores. Overall, it can be seen that publishing a book requires some controlled stages and complex equipment. All the steps are mandatory and if any step is missed, the process will come to halt. At the first glance, it is apparent that writing vis initial step which send to publishing houses. Then it is received by editors for deep study. Subsequently, they make contract with book publishing center. Before printing, the design of layout is made to finalize the size of paper. Furthermore, papers are printed by the printer. In the following step, papers are sent for binding and it converts into the form of book. Eventually, books are distributed into bookshops for sale.
The assigned process chart illustrates information about the procedure for
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publishing
a
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book
. This process has around 9
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steps
, initiating from writing and ending at distribution to bookstores.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that
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publishing
a
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book
requires
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some
controlled stages and complex equipment. All the
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steps
are mandatory and if any
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step
is missed
, the process will
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come
to halt.

At the
first
glance, it is apparent that writing
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vis
initial
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step
which
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send
to
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publishing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
. Then it
is received
by editors for deep study.
Subsequently
, they
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make
contract with
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book
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publishing
center.
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Before
printing, the design of layout
is made
to finalize the size of paper.

Furthermore
, papers
are printed
by the printer. In the following
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step
, papers are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
for binding and it converts into the form of
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book
.
Eventually
,
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books
are distributed
into bookshops for sale.
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IELTS academic The process chart shows the method of publishing a book.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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