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Five countries expenditure

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The table chart represents the proportion of money spent on household wages by five various Europen countries. Calibration of data is done in percentage. Overall, the maximum percentile was of food and drink as well as of housing by these countries. Whilst minimum intrested was shown in clothing and entrainment. To begin with food and drink, turkey was the highest among all these 4 countries. While other countries shows slightly declined in their expenditure toward this. 31% Turkish people intrested on spent their money, which was followed by UK, France and Germany respectively. Whilst housing was mostly chosed by three countries however Turkey and Spain were in the same pace. Individuals were least intrested in bought clothes, their income spent was in the range of 7% to 15% respectively. Entertainment was not their preference choice but some European showed some interest. Germany used only 19 % from their income. Least chosed by UK. To recapitulate all European citizens tilted towards the cuisine.
The table chart represents the proportion of money spent on household wages by five various
Europen
countries
. Calibration of data
is done
in percentage.

Overall
, the maximum percentile was of food and drink
as well
as of housing by these
countries
. Whilst minimum
intrested
was shown
in clothing and entrainment.

To
begin
with food and drink, turkey was the highest among all these 4
countries
.
While
other
countries
shows
slightly
declined in their expenditure toward this. 31% Turkish
people
intrested
on spent their money, which
was followed
by UK, France and Germany
respectively
. Whilst housing was
mostly
chosed
by three
countries
however
Turkey and Spain were in the same pace.

Individuals were least
intrested
in
bought
clothes, their income spent was in the range of 7% to 15%
respectively
. Entertainment was not their preference choice
but
some
European
showed
some
interest. Germany
used
only
19 % from their income. Least
chosed
by UK.

To recapitulate all European citizens tilted towards the cuisine.
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IELTS academic Five countries expenditure

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
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