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The chart below shows the crude oil production in Russia, USA and Saudi Arabia between 2010 and 2016.

The chart below shows the crude oil production in Russia, USA and Saudi Arabia between 2010 and 2016. 9wmmx
The chart column below estimate the number of crude oil in tons between three countries in the period of 210 to 2016. From an overall view, the rate of produced crudeoil daily reache a peack amog all countries in 2016. According to the given graph, Russia and Saudi Arabia had not a noticeable changesduring seven years in their producing process. In 2010, Russia had a lower rate about 100K tons compar with Saudi Arabia. After two years, both nations rose, although Russia's rase was more efficiently but still Saudi Arabia was in higher place 500K and over 500K approximately. Russia had experienced a slight decrease in 2014 in their daily production goes to under 500K. While, Saudi Arabia had slow grew. In the last year, with a huge change in percentags the higher percent goes to Russia which had a dramatic rose nearly 600K and the slightly grew for Saudi Arabia. Subsequently, the other country in the chart is USA wich had the lower produce over seven years. In 2010, under a 200K tons crude oil which increased and reached to over a 300K in the two years later. Moreover, the next years were the best year for USA. Owing to, the number of products had extrimly rose to under 500K tons which was a stable rate and countinued untill 2016.
The chart column below estimate the number of crude oil in tons between three

countries in the period of 210 to 2016. From an
overall
view, the rate of produced
crudeoil
daily
reache
a
peack
amog
all countries in 2016.

According to the
given
graph, Russia and Saudi Arabia had not a noticeable
changesduring
seven years in their producing process. In 2010, Russia had a lower rate about 100K tons
compar
with Saudi Arabia. After two years, both nations rose, although Russia's
rase
was more
efficiently
but
still
Saudi Arabia was in higher place 500K and over 500K approximately. Russia had experienced a slight decrease in 2014 in their daily production goes to under 500K.
While
, Saudi Arabia had slow grew. In the last
year
, with a huge
change
in
percentags
the higher percent goes to Russia which had a dramatic rose
nearly
600K and the
slightly
grew for Saudi Arabia.

Subsequently
, the other country in the chart is USA
wich
had the lower produce over seven years. In 2010, under a 200K tons crude oil which increased and reached to over a 300K in the two years later.
Moreover
, the
next
years were the best
year
for USA
. Owing to, the number of products had
extrimly
rose to under 500K tons which was a stable rate and
countinued
untill
2016.
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