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The bar chart shows the total number of tigers at all

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The bar chart illustrates figures of tigers in India during 1972-2002, while the line graph provides information about amounts of this animals in five various reserves. Overall, there are upward and downward trends in bar chart, while line graph has stable indicators in addition to these tendencies. The population of tigers were growing throughout the period, the lowest figure was in 1972, which is 268. Then it started to uplift until 1993, it has went up till 1366 and in 1995 it slightly decreased to 1333. The population of tigers reached its peak in 2002, which is 1576. The least quantity of tigers were in Buxa in 1979, which is marginally increased but it remained the smallest among others. Bandipur had the greatest numbers, which was approximately 52 in 1972 and it is significantly soared and became around 250.
The bar chart illustrates figures of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tigers
in India during 1972-2002, while the line graph provides information about amounts of this animals in five various reserves.

Overall
, there are upward and downward trends in bar chart, while line graph has stable indicators
in addition
to these tendencies.

The population of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tigers
were growing throughout the period, the lowest figure was in 1972, which is 268. Then it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to uplift until 1993, it has
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went
up till 1366 and in 1995 it
slightly
decreased to 1333. The population of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tigers
reached its peak in 2002, which is 1576.

The least quantity of
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tigers
were in
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Buxa
in 1979, which is
marginally
increased
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but
it remained the smallest among others.
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Bandipur
had the greatest numbers, which was approximately 52 in 1972 and it is
significantly
soared and became around 250.
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