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TEH CHART BELOW SHOW THE CHNAGES TAHT TOOK PLACE IN THREE DIFFERENT AREAS OF CRIME IN CHINA FROM 2003 TO 2012.

TEH CHART BELOW SHOW THE CHNAGES TAHT TOOK PLACE IN THREE DIFFERENT AREAS OF CRIME IN CHINA FROM 2003 TO 2012. yxBBd
THE LINE GRAPH REPRESENT THE NUMBER OF CASES REGISTERED FOR THREE CRIMINAL OFFENSES (CAR THEFT, BURGULARY AND ROBBERY) IN CHINA BETWEEN 2003 AND 2012. OVERALL, THE DIGIT OF ROBBERY AND CAR THEFT SHOW A SIMILAR FLUCTUATING TREND WHEREAS, BURGULARY SHOW A DOWNWARDING TREND IN GIVEN PERIOD. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN FORMER YEAR, THE NUMERIC OF ROBBERIES AND VEHICLE THEFT IS NEAR 600 AND 2600 CASES RESPECTIVELY. THE CASES OF ROBBERIES INCLINES MARGINALLY TO AROUND 900 IN 2005 AND DROPS TO 500 CASE IN NEXT PERIOD. THEN, IT REMAINED STABLE TILL 2012. MEANWHILE. THE NUMERIC OF THEFT REMAINED CONSTANT TILL THIRD YEAR AND FALLS TO 2000 CASES IN 2006. IN 2010, THE NUMBER OF CAR THEFTS INCREASES TO OVER 2500 AND END WITH AROUND 2400. THE LINE CHART FURTEHR COLLATE THAT, THE BURGULARY BEGIN FROM THE HIGHEST POINT THAN OTHER AS, IT ROSES TO NEAR 3600 IN 2004 THEN, IT DECLINES DRAMATICALLY IN FOUR YEARS TO MERELY ABOVE 1000 AND IT HIKE TO 1500 IN 20011. FINALLY, THE NUMBER OF CASES FOR BURGULARY IS SIMILAR TO 2008.
THE LINE GRAPH REPRESENT THE NUMBER OF CASES REGISTERED FOR THREE CRIMINAL OFFENSES (CAR
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THEFT
,
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BURGULARY
AND
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ROBBERY)
IN CHINA BETWEEN 2003 AND 2012.

OVERALL
, THE DIGIT OF
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ROBBERY
AND CAR
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THEFT
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SHOW
A SIMILAR FLUCTUATING TREND WHEREAS,
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BURGULARY
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SHOW
A
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DOWNWARDING
TREND IN
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GIVEN
PERIOD.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, IN FORMER YEAR, THE NUMERIC OF
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ROBBERIES
AND VEHICLE
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THEFT
IS NEAR 600 AND 2600 CASES
RESPECTIVELY
. THE CASES OF
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ROBBERIES
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INCLINES
MARGINALLY
TO AROUND 900 IN 2005 AND DROPS TO 500 CASE IN
NEXT
PERIOD. THEN, IT REMAINED STABLE TILL 2012. MEANWHILE. THE NUMERIC OF
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THEFT
REMAINED CONSTANT TILL THIRD YEAR AND FALLS TO 2000 CASES IN 2006. IN 2010, THE NUMBER OF CAR
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THEFTS
INCREASES TO OVER 2500 AND
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END
WITH AROUND 2400.

THE LINE CHART
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FURTEHR
COLLATE THAT, THE
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BURGULARY
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BEGIN
FROM THE HIGHEST POINT THAN OTHER AS, IT ROSES TO NEAR 3600 IN 2004 THEN, IT DECLINES
DRAMATICALLY
IN FOUR YEARS TO
MERELY
ABOVE 1000 AND IT HIKE TO 1500 IN 20011.
FINALLY
, THE NUMBER OF CASES FOR
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BURGULARY
IS SIMILAR TO 2008.
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IELTS academic TEH CHART BELOW SHOW THE CHNAGES TAHT TOOK PLACE IN THREE DIFFERENT AREAS OF CRIME IN CHINA FROM 2003 TO 2012.

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