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The line graph illustrates the percentage of inhabitants aged 65 or older than Japan, Sweden, USA in the specific year. Overall the proportion of eldrly people grew in Japan, Sweden and USA over a hundred period year. Exception of Japan it is clear that this country was significantly skyrocket between 2029 and 2040. The proportion of Americans marked increase from 10% in 1940 to 15% in 1980. The next 40 years this number was stabilized. However the percentage of elderly people in USA jumped dramatically. Between 2020 and 2040 it climbed from 15 to roughly 25%. While the proportion of Amercians was stabilizing, Sweden was increasing. Looking into future, the proportion of elderly people in Japan was icreased suddenly, with jump of over 15% from 2030 to 2040. It is clear that Japanes population of around 27% will be 65 years old. Sweden and USA will be slightly lower than Japan.

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