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The presented two pie charts give information about the most pervasive pros and cons of Bowen Island, by survey which reflects opinion from visitors.

The presented two pie charts give information about the most pervasive pros and cons of Bowen Island, by survey which reflects opinion from visitors. 6xDRB
The presented two pie charts give information about the most pervasive pros and cons of Bowen Island, by survey which reflects opinion from visitors. It is clear that, high cost of living and entertainment are most common disadvantages while the people who live in there and the scenery are most pervasive advantages to call on Bowen Island. Taking a closer look at the disadvantages, high cost of living is marked as a disadvantages by half of the visitors and, entertainment comes to second high percentage, its percantage is 25. Wheather and food quality are pointed as a disadvantages, theirs percantages are nearly the same each other, theirs proportion are 15% and 10% respectively. Turning to advantages, nearly half of visitors call on island to the people. The second high percentage have the secenery, its proportion 35%. Culture and good accommodition have almost percentage to visit’s reason and theirs percentage are 12 and 11 respectively.
The presented two pie charts give information about the most pervasive pros and cons of Bowen Island, by survey which reflects opinion from visitors.

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common disadvantages while the
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half of visitors call on island to the
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. The second
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have the
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, its proportion 35%. Culture and
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accommodition
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are 12 and 11
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IELTS academic The presented two pie charts give information about the most pervasive pros and cons of Bowen Island, by survey which reflects opinion from visitors.

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