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The presented diagram shows producing energy

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The given diagram indicates to people how generate energy by yourself. Overall, there are many stages in the process beginning with collecting compost and water in steel tank and ending with generating electricity for use home. First of all, soil which include compost and water is gathered in steel tank and it produces methane gas because of fermentating. Methane gas is storaged and it is comprassed by comprassor then, comprassed methane gas is conveyed through the pipe to combustion engine. The gas is turned into mechanical energy by means of combustion engine and, electrical energy is generated from mechanical energy thanks to generator. Generator is most important part of the producing energy because it is compulsory to generate energy from mechanical energy. All of energy do not use at the same time and, the rest of the energy is storaged in battery. Finally, producing energy is used for home use when it is requirement.
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diagram indicates to
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people
how generate
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energy
by yourself.

Overall
, there are
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many
stages in the process beginning with collecting compost and water in steel tank and ending with generating electricity for
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use
home.

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First of all
, soil which include compost and water
is gathered
in steel tank and it produces methane
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gas
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because
of
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fermentating
. Methane
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gas
is
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storaged
and it is
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comprassed
by
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comprassor
then,
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comprassed
methane
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gas
is conveyed
through the pipe to combustion engine. The
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gas
is turned
into mechanical
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energy
by means of combustion engine and, electrical
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energy
is generated
from mechanical
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energy
thanks to generator. Generator is
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most
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important
part of the producing
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energy
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because
it is compulsory to generate
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energy
from mechanical
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energy
. All of
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energy
do not
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use
at the same time and, the rest of the
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energy
is
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storaged
in battery.
Finally
, producing
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energy
is
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used
for home
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use
when it is requirement.
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