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The presented graph shows how Asian elephants number changes between 1994 and 2007

The presented graph shows how Asian elephants number changes between 1994 and 2007 XGNPE
The given line graph gives information about the maximum amount of Asian elephants which changes in from 1994 to 2007. Overall, it can be seen that the hishest number of elephants belonged to India whereas, China had the least number of it within the given years. Totally the number of elephants in 1997 was higher than in 2004 and, also there are a significant differences of elephants existence. Taking a closer look at the chart, at the beginning of the period, China had the least number of the elephants, which it was 1000 elephants, then it decreased to just under 400 elephants. Malaysia and Thailand experienced a steep decrease the number of elephants, that it is a sharp decrease almost 2000 elephants. Vietham, Cambodia and Laos had the nearly similar amount of elephants and theirs number remained the stable between the given years. Myanmar came to second highest number of it, just above 5000 elephants, then its amount fall to 4700 elephants. The number of elephants in Sri Lanka almost remained the steady, which was nearly 3000 elephants
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hishest
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belonged to India whereas, China had the least
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of it within the
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in 1997 was higher than in 2004 and,
also
there are a significant
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differences
of
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existence.

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of the
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, which it was 1000
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, then it decreased to
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under 400
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. Malaysia and Thailand experienced a steep decrease the
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of
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, that it is a sharp decrease almost 2000
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.
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, Cambodia and Laos had the
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and theirs
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remained the stable between the
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years. Myanmar came to second highest
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above 5000
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, then its amount fall to 4700
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. The
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in Sri Lanka almost remained the steady, which was
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3000
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IELTS academic The presented graph shows how Asian elephants number changes between 1994 and 2007

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