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The given bar chart gives information about the amount of travellers who prefer different three popular airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000.

The given bar chart gives information about the amount of travellers who prefer different three popular airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. 9LDe3
The given bar chart gives information about the amount of travellers who prefer different three popular airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. Overall, LaGuardia had the most using airport to travellers the given years, it was followed by John F. Kennedy and Newark respectively. Compared to other years, the highest number of people used airports to travel in 2000. At first glance, it is clear that LaGuardia was prefered by nearly 35 millions travellers at the beginning of the period, then it reached the peak almost 69 million peoples at the end of the year. Between 1995 and 2000, the amount of people who use Laguardia increased gradually. Newark airport had the lowest number of travellers in 1995 (approximately 16 million peoples), it experienced an upward trend the given years. It grow up steadily from 1995 to 1998, then its travellers rate remained the same other two years, which it was 41 miillion peoples. John F. Kennedy airport showed fluctiations trend the given years. Its travellers number increased from 1995 to1997, then it decreased to 32 millions people in 1999.
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travellers
who prefer
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different
three popular
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airports
in New York City from 1995 to 2000.

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, LaGuardia had the most using
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airport
to
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travellers
the
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given
years, it
was followed
by John F. Kennedy and Newark
respectively
. Compared to other years, the highest number of
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people
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used
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airports
to travel in 2000.

At
first
glance, it is
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clear
that LaGuardia was
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prefered
by
nearly
35
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millions
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travellers
at the beginning of the period, then it reached the peak almost 69
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million
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peoples
at the
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end
of the
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year
. Between 1995 and 2000, the amount of
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people
who
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use
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Laguardia
increased
gradually
. Newark
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airport
had the lowest number of
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travellers
in 1995 (approximately 16
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million
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peoples)
, it experienced an upward trend the
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given
years. It
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grow
up
steadily
from 1995 to 1998, then its
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travellers
rate remained the same other two years, which it was 41
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miillion
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peoples
. John F. Kennedy
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airport
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showed
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fluctiations
trend the
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given
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travellers
number increased from 1995 to1997, then it decreased to 32
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millions
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people
in 1999.
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IELTS academic The given bar chart gives information about the amount of travellers who prefer different three popular airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000.

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