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The presented data information reveals the three different levels of satisfaction that both genders of a city sports club evaluate their club’s activities, facilities and opeing hours.

The presented data information reveals the three different levels of satisfaction that both genders of a city sports club evaluate their club’s activities, facilities and opeing hours. aAJwm
The presented data information reveals the three different levels of satisfaction that both genders of a city sports club evaluate their club’s activities, facilities and opeing hours. As is clearly observed, the proportion of “very satisfied” results of club facilities greatly overwhelms two other levels. While women are mostly pleasant with the opening hours, men tend to love the variety of activities because of a little dissatisfaction. In terms of types of activities, the percentage of female's evaluation account for 35% in both levels of contentment and approximately a third for “Not satisfied” option, which are nearly equal. In contrast, male members evaluate 55% and 40% in “very satisfied” and “satisfied”, respectively; they spend only 5% in non- satisfaction. Moving to club amenities, both genders dominated with just below 65% in the most pleasant level, but women’s less enjoyment was still around 5% higher than that of men. It is observed that females likely appreciate the opening hours for 72%, the highest data in the whole table. They also spend the lowest proportion, only 3% in disfavour, in this category. To be contradicted, the percentage of men without satisfaction is above a third, which is the largest rate in this level.
The presented data information reveals the three
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of satisfaction that both genders of a city sports
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club
evaluate their
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club’s
activities, facilities and
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opeing
hours.

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clearly
observed, the proportion of “
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satisfied”
results of
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club
facilities
greatly
overwhelms two other
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levels
. While women are
mostly
pleasant with the opening hours,
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men
tend to
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love
the variety of activities
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because
of a
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little
dissatisfaction.

In terms of types of activities, the percentage of female's evaluation account for 35% in both
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levels
of contentment and approximately a third for “Not
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satisfied”
option, which are
nearly
equal.
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, male members evaluate 55% and 40% in “
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very
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satisfied”
and
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“satisfied”
,
respectively
; they spend
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only
5% in non- satisfaction. Moving to
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club
amenities, both genders dominated with
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just
below 65% in the most pleasant
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level
,
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but
women’s less enjoyment was
still
around 5% higher than that of
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men
.

It
is observed
that females likely appreciate the opening hours for 72%, the highest data in the whole table. They
also
spend the lowest proportion,
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only
3% in
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disfavour
, in this category. To
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, the percentage of
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men
without satisfaction is above a third, which is the largest rate in this
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level
.
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IELTS academic The presented data information reveals the three different levels of satisfaction that both genders of a city sports club evaluate their club’s activities, facilities and opeing hours.

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