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food buget spent on the restsursnt and home cooking

food buget spent on the restsursnt and home cooking l7R71

The pie chart provides information about the proportion of money spent for restaurant meals and home cooking. Whereas line graph shows the number of meals people had in the fast food and sit down restaurants annually. Overall, it is readily apparent that, although people utilize more budget for home cooking in the initial years, the trend has changed significantly over the 3 decades and they prefer sit down restaurant meals than fast food. In 1973, a major portion of the food budget spent for home cooking, merely 10 percent was used for restaurant meals; however after 20 years, the figures has changed to 65 percent and 35 percent respectively. By the final year, an equal amount of money spent for both meals. It is clear from the line graph that, in the initial year, a same number of meals eaten from both fast food and sit down restaurant and it accounts for 20 meals. In the following years the fast food meals illustrated a steady raise from 25 to 90meals per day. While, the latter one shows only slight increase from 30 to 45 meals annually.

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a same number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfaresnackpicnicdessertfeastrefreshment
meals
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fast
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meals
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