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The statistical information represented below displays the carbon dioxide emissions which averagely producted per person in four countries during 1967 and 2007. In this case, the quantity had been calibrated in metric tonnes. Overall, the people in Italy and Portugal tend to have escalation on their carbon dioxide emissions. Meanwhile, both Sweden and the United Kingdom relatively have decreased their carbon dioxide production between these periods. Based on the graph, Italy had been experienced a considerable increase in the first decade. This significant progress, subsequently, continued until 1997, when this country eventually got a steady progress. This was almost similar with Portugal, when this country tend to have a minor progress since 1997. On the other hand, although Sweden had an overwhelming decline on its carbon dioxide emissions, during 1967 and 1977, the carbon dioxide production per person in this country had increased. Furthermore, although the United Kingdom could not had a radical decrease as well as Sweden on its carbon dioxide average production, this country always showed a consistent progress to reduce it.
The statistical information represented below displays the
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dioxide emissions which
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producted
per person in four
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countries
during 1967 and 2007.
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, the quantity had
been calibrated
in metric tonnes.

Overall
, the
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people
in Italy and Portugal tend to have escalation on their
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carbon
dioxide emissions. Meanwhile, both Sweden and the United Kingdom
relatively
have decreased their
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carbon
dioxide production between these periods.

Based on the graph, Italy had
been experienced
a considerable increase in the
first
decade. This significant
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progress
,
subsequently
, continued until 1997, when this
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country
eventually
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got
a steady
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progress
. This was almost similar with Portugal, when this
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country
tend to have a minor
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progress
since 1997.

On the other hand
, although Sweden had an overwhelming decline on its
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carbon
dioxide emissions, during 1967 and 1977, the
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carbon
dioxide production per person in this
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country
had increased.
Furthermore
, although the United Kingdom could not
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had
a radical decrease
as well
as Sweden on its
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carbon
dioxide average production, this
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country
always
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showed
a consistent
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reduce
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IELTS academic the carbon dioxide emissions which averagely producted per person in four countries during 1967 and 2007.

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