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the populations in Japan

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The given chart and table illustrate the populations in Japan both in the past and in the future, from 1950 to 2055. At a first glance, in the chart listed details numbers of population (millions) for every five-year interval. It describes population aged and total population percentage in the below table. Firstly, it can be seen less population in 1950 and the rate of residence has been gradually increased until 2005, 127. 8 million in total. After that, it was unnoticeable declining over 10 years. Moreover, it is predicted that it will be shrunk to 89. 9 million in 2055. There was the lowest population amount, 4. 1 million, in the age of 65 and above in 1950 and there will be a dramatic increment in 2035 up to 37. 2 million. Although the number of 65 years old and above populations will be jumped to over 8 times within 1950 to 2055, total population percentage of 65 years and above will be upward trends in 2055, 41%. To sum up, Japan’s population has been rising until 2005 and there will be lessening amount in the future.
The
given
chart and table illustrate the
populations
in Japan both in the past and in the future, from 1950 to 2055. At a
first
glance, in the chart listed
details
numbers of
population
(millions)
for every five-year interval. It
describes
population
aged and total
population
percentage in the below table.

Firstly
, it can be
seen
less
population
in 1950 and the rate of residence has been
gradually
increased until 2005, 127. 8
million
in total. After that, it was unnoticeable declining over 10 years.
Moreover
, it
is predicted
that it will
be shrunk
to 89. 9
million
in 2055.

There was the lowest
population
amount, 4. 1
million
, in the age of 65 and above in 1950 and there will be a dramatic increment in 2035 up to 37. 2
million
. Although the number of 65 years
old
and above
populations
will
be jumped
to over 8 times within 1950 to 2055, total
population
percentage of 65 years and above will be upward trends in 2055, 41%.

To sum up, Japan’s
population
has been rising until 2005 and there will be lessening amount in the future.
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