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Anthropology graduates after finishing undergraduate courses and salary after five years,

Anthropology graduates after finishing undergraduate courses and salary after five years, 86j8B

The pie chart and table below depict the destination of anthropology fresh graduates from one university and their income after five years in different types of jobs. It is clear from the two figures, that some graduates started their works while others merge it with post studies. Moreover, the earnings were various according to the category of work. The number of the anthropologist who works full time after finish undergraduates program reaches to a little above half percent, which obviously it is the largest in the total. While others with part-time jobs equal fifteen in the rate. However, students who continued their high studies besides the work was a tiny fraction. Although, the unemployed graduates were a small portion. After five years later, both of freelancer workers and governmental section had the highest amount of salary compared to those in the private companies. To sum up, graduates working all time is the largest in their amount and working in the governmental type of work have more benefits and more income.

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