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THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE POPULATION FIGURES FOR DIFFERENT TYPES OF TURTLES IN INDIA FROM 1980 TO 2012.

THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE POPULATION FIGURES FOR DIFFERENT TYPES OF TURTLES IN INDIA FROM 1980 TO 2012. w7Ywd
THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH POPULATION OF VARIOUS TYPE OF TURTLES IN INDIA OVER A PERIOD OF 32 YEARS. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE LINE GRAPH THAT THE RATIO OF OLIVE REDLEV TURTLES POPULATION WAS THE HIGHEST AMONG OTHER TURTLES, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF LEATHER BACK TURTLES POPULATION WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 100 INDEX IN 1980 AND SLOWLY INCREASING TO 103 INDEX IN 1982, THE AVERAGE OF LEATHER BACK TURTLES POPULATION IN INDIA SLIGHTLY DECREASE BY 99 INDEX IN 1984. ALTHOUGH 100 INDEX IN 1980 AND ELEVATION TO 110 INDEX IN 1982, THE PERCENTAGE OF GREEN TURTLES POPULATION IN INDIA FALL BY 100 INDEX IN 1984. HOWEVER, THE NUMBER OF ALL SPECIES AND OLIVE REDLEV TURTLES POPULATION BOTH WERE EQUAL IN 2 PERIOD SO THAT THE NUMBER OF TURTLES POPULATION WAS 100 INDEX IN 1980 AND EXTENSION TO 105 UNDEX IN 1982. NEXT YEAR THE POPULATION OF THAT BOTH TURTLES WERE NOT SAME. THE ALL SPECIES OF TURTLES POPULATION EXPAND TO 112 INDEX IN 112 SIMILARLY THE VALUE OF OLIVE REDLEV TURTLES POPULATION ALSO GROW BY 108 INDEX IN 1984. MOREOVER, AFTER 16 YEARS IN 2000, THE NUMERAL OF LEATHER BACK TURTLES POPULATION IMMENSELY DECLINE AT ONLY 70 INDEX WHILE THE POPULATION OF GREEN TURTLES ALSO WENT DOWN TO 80 INDEX LIKEWISE, THE VALUE OF ALL SPECIES TURTLES DROP BY 98 INDEX THECE THE OLIVE REDLEV TURTLES OF POPULATION EXTREMELY WENT UP WAS 132 INDEX. HOWEVER LAST YEAR IN 2012, THE QUANTITY OF LEATHER BACK TURTLES POPULATION LOWER AT 60 INDEX AND THAT VALUE SLIGHTLY TOWERING TO 82 INDEX THEREFORE, THE PROPORTION OF ALL SPECIES POPULATION INCREASING BY 108 INDEX COMPARABLY, THE POPULATION OF OLIVE REDLEV TURTLES SLOWLY DECLINE WAS 130 INDEX IN 2012.
THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH
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IN INDIA OVER A PERIOD OF 32 YEARS.
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, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE LINE GRAPH THAT THE RATIO OF OLIVE
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, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF
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WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE
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IN 1982, THE AVERAGE OF
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DECREASE BY 99
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IN 1984. ALTHOUGH 100
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IN 1980 AND ELEVATION TO 110
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IN 1982, THE PERCENTAGE OF GREEN
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IN 1984.
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BOTH WERE EQUAL IN 2 PERIOD
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IN 1980 AND EXTENSION TO 105
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AND THAT VALUE
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IN 2012.
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