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The given line graph and table illustrates the temperature variations in a month as well as the amount of sunshine in a year in three main regions

The given line graph and table illustrates the temperature variations in a month as well as the amount of sunshine in a year in three main regions 7POdn

The given line graph and table illustrates the temperature variations in a month as well as the amount of sunshine in a year in three main regions Overall, the three regions experienced fluctuating trend in terms of temperature, over the period of one year while, the amount of sunlight received is maximum in New York and least in London. Firstly, the temperature in London was almost 10 at the beginning of the year and peaked in the month of July and august with over 20, before falling off to around 10 at the end of the year. Similar trend was followed by New York, where the starting temperature was 5, before experiencing drastic increase of about 30 degrees in the middle of the year followed by significant decline, standing with the same temperature it started the year with. In contrast, average temperature of Sydney was the highest comparatively, upto 25 degrees followed by a decrease in July, and then was back to 25 at the end of the year Furthermore, New York received sunlight for 2535 hours throughout the year, making it the highest of all, followed by Sydney which stood at 2473 hours. In addition, London stood at 1180 hours.

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