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The plans of Southwest airport redevelopment

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The given map illustrates how the airport of Southwest is expected to be renovated from its current setup. It is clear that the number of the boarding gates is due to undergo significant redevelopment. At present, the boarding area comprises 8 gates with a walkway from the first gate to the third gate. In the departure area, there are two services, the check-in counter at the left and a café at the right before going checking out to the security passport control. In comparison, passport control customs is the only provided service in the arrival location. The future of the Southwest airport will look rather different with 10 boarding gates being increased. Internal transportation, the sky train, will also be constructed, which will provide an advantage of service for the passengers to catch their flight. As for commercial facilities, the present café will be moved to the corner of the area and replaced by the check-in counters, which will place a bag drop service. Various facilities will be established in the arrival site as well, such as cafe, car hire areas, and the service of ATM machines. However, in the restricted area, only the departure place has shops that can hang around.
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map illustrates how the airport of Southwest is
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expected
to
be renovated
from its
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current
setup. It is
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clear
that the number of the boarding
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gates
is due to undergo significant redevelopment.

At present, the boarding
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area
comprises 8
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gates
with a walkway from the
first
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gate
to the third
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gate
. In the departure
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area
, there are two
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services
, the
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check
-in counter at the
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left
and a café at the right
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before
going checking out to the security passport control.
In comparison
, passport control customs is the
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only
provided
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service
in the arrival location.

The future of the Southwest airport will look
rather
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different
with 10 boarding
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gates
being increased
. Internal transportation, the sky train, will
also
be constructed
, which will provide an advantage of
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service
for the passengers to catch their flight. As for commercial facilities, the present café will be
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moved
to the corner of the
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area
and replaced by the
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check
-in counters, which will place a bag drop
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service
. Various facilities will
be established
in the arrival site
as well
, such as
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cafe
, car hire
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areas
, and the
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service
of
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ATM machines
.
However
, in the restricted
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area
,
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only
the departure place has shops that can hang around.
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IELTS academic The plans of Southwest airport redevelopment

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3 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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