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The plans demonstrate the map of the airport at present and how it will be altered in the next year.

The plans demonstrate the map of the airport at present and how it will be altered in the next year. nELkn
The plans demonstrate the map of the airport at present and how it will be altered in the next year. As can be seen from the plans, the airport will expand and add plenty of services to serve for the passengers. Apparently, the depatures and the arrivals area will remain unchaged. It has a small change that add one more checking door for each area. The space for security, passport control and customs will not have any adjustments. The shop will be destructed. The check-in point and the coffee shop in the departures area will be projected to change to the opposite side. The bag drop will be added. In the arrivals area, there will be a massive modification. There are three buildings are in the changing plan to be construct. The ATM and another coffee shop serve the customer's need, and the car hire is going to be subjoin in an expanded area. The most noticeable change is the gates. Now, there are 8 gates with the walkway to connect them, but after 1-year period, it is projected to become 18 gates, which means 10 gates will be added and the way to connect them will also alter, they use sky train instead of walkway.
The plans demonstrate the map of the airport at present and how it will
be altered
in the
next
year.

As can be
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seen
from the plans, the airport will expand and
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add
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plenty
of services to serve for the passengers.

Apparently
, the
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depatures
and the
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "arrivals'" or "arrival's"?
arrivals
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
will remain
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unchaged
. It has a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
one more checking door for each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
. The space for security, passport control and customs will not have any adjustments. The shop will
be destructed
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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check
-in point and the coffee shop in the
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "departures'" or "departure's"?
departures
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area
will
be projected
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
to the opposite side.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
bag drop will be
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added
. In the
Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "arrivals'" or "arrival's"?
arrivals
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
, there will be a massive modification. There are three buildings are in the changing plan to be
Consider using a past participle here: "constructed".
construct
. The ATM and another coffee shop serve the customer's need, and the car hire is going to be
Consider using a past participle here: "subjoined".
subjoin
in an expanded area.

The most noticeable
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change
is the
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gates
.
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Now
, there are 8
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gates
with the walkway to connect them,
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but
after 1-year period, it
is projected
to become 18
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gates
, which means 10
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gates
will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
and the way to connect them will
also
alter, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
sky train
instead
of walkway.

IELTS academic The plans demonstrate the map of the airport at present and how it will be altered in the next year.

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