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the line graphs shows consumption of wood products in the UK in 2008.

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The given line graph depicts that the expanding of timber items such as Sawn wood, Wood based panels and paper for the year 2008. The data has been calibrated in numbers. Overall, it can be apparently seen from the line graph that at the initial stage sawn wood based product was decrease and paper based item was increase, whie wood based panels were remain same for short period. Firstly, talking about the panels and paper based products, Between year 1994 and 1997, there was a continues rose of notice in paper which is reported almost 110, while in wood based panels started with 103 number and it remained same till the year 1998, in between there was a minor fall of which is around 92 number, then they both prodecuts intersects in year 2000, 2003, 2005, and in 2007. Secondly, focusing athor side of wood items, there was a rapid decline observed in sawn wood products from the year 1994 to 1995. Nevertheless, it was started to climb up and stayed at 110 number in 2005. However, it again fall down and reached at around 85 number in year 2008. To cap it all, it can be vividly manifasted that least number of consumption notice in sawn wood based prodcuts, while minor fall down was seen in paper based products.
The
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given
line graph depicts that the expanding of timber items such as
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Sawn
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wood
,
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Wood
based
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panels
and paper for the
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year
2008. The data has
been calibrated
in numbers.

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, it can be
apparently
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seen
from the line graph that at the initial stage
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sawn
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wood
based
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product
was decrease and paper based item was increase,
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whie
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wood
based
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panels
were
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same for short period.

Firstly
, talking about the
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panels
and paper based
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products
, Between
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year
1994 and 1997, there was a continues rose of notice in paper which
is reported
almost 110, while in
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wood
based
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panels
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started
with 103
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number
and it remained same till the
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year
1998, in between there was a minor fall of which is around 92
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number
, then they both
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prodecuts
intersects in
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year
2000, 2003, 2005, and in 2007.

Secondly
, focusing
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athor
side of
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wood
items, there was a rapid decline observed in
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sawn
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wood
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products
from the
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year
1994 to 1995.
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, it was
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started
to climb up and stayed at 110
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number
in 2005.
However
, it again
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fall
down and reached at around 85
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number
in
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year
2008.

To cap it all, it can be
vividly
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manifasted
that least
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number
of consumption notice in
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sawn
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wood
based
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prodcuts
, while minor fall down was
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seen
in paper based
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products
.
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