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the plans below show the site of an airport now and the redevelopments planned for the next year.

the plans below show the site of an airport now and the redevelopments planned for the next year. p11Bd
The provided maps illustrate the current Southwest airport and the changes planned for its refurbishment. The field will extend to include multiple entry and exit door. It will introduce multiple departure and arrival terminus to accommodate the travelers. Bag-drop and car-drop counters will be built along with an ATM. Highlight of the refurbished installation will be the Y-shaped lane, that will include 18 gates as compared to 8 in the present. The development authorities will be installing the sky train in the middle of the lane which will replace the walkway. Shops will occupy the space towards the left-hand side of the lane. Adjacent to the shops, the relative positions of the security passport control and passport control customs will stay intact. However, the bag-drop counter will replace the check-in area. The new check-in counter will be exact opposite to it. The café will occupy the position right in juxtaposition to the counter. One new café will be introduced at the right-hand corner next to the customs department. In the same line, ATM will occupy the subsequent position. Furthermore, the car hire will be nearest to the arrival gate, at the right corner. In conclusion, these plans will make sure that the future airfield can accommodate more travelers. The careful inclusion of the facilities will improve customer satisfaction too.
The provided maps illustrate the
current
Southwest airport and the
changes
planned for its refurbishment. The field will extend to include multiple entry and exit door. It will introduce multiple departure and arrival terminus to accommodate the travelers. Bag-drop and car-drop
counters
will
be built
along with an ATM.

Highlight of the refurbished installation will be the Y-shaped lane, that will include 18 gates as compared to 8 in the present. The development authorities will be installing the sky train in the middle of the lane which will replace the walkway. Shops will occupy the space towards the
left
-hand side of the lane. Adjacent to the shops, the relative positions of the security passport control and passport control customs will stay intact.
However
, the bag-drop
counter
will replace the
check
-in area. The new
check
-in
counter
will be exact opposite to it. The café will occupy the position right in juxtaposition to the
counter
. One new café will
be introduced
at the right-hand corner
next
to the customs department. In the same line, ATM will occupy the subsequent position.
Furthermore
, the car hire will be nearest to the arrival gate, at the right corner.

In conclusion
, these plans will
make
sure that the future airfield can accommodate more travelers. The careful inclusion of the facilities will
improve
customer satisfaction too.
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IELTS academic the plans below show the site of an airport now and the redevelopments planned for the next year.

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