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The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013.

The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013. r66ol
The line graph compares the contribution of renewables to the total energy production in six selected countries between 2010 and 2013. In 2010, China generated 19% of its total energy from renewable sources, followed by Germany and India, with around 17% each. After bottoming at 17%, Chinese figure recovered to more than 20% in 2012 and remained almost stable at its second position. Meanwhile, Germany saw a rise throughout the 3-year period to a peak of 15%, compared to India with a slight variation. Ranked the following positions were Spain and France, with almost the same share of 13% at the start. The contribution of renewable power in these countries showed similar growths over the period, by approximately 2% each. By comparison, US figure was up to over 12% in 2011 and then stayed nearly unchanged for the remaining years, the lowest among the six nations. Overall, Germany produced by far the highest percentage of renewable power over its total energy generation, and except India, the figures for the other countries rose remarkably over the period surveyed.
The line graph compares the contribution of
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to the total energy production in six selected countries between 2010 and 2013.

In 2010, China generated 19% of its total energy from
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renewable
sources, followed by Germany and India, with around 17% each. After bottoming at 17%, Chinese figure recovered to more than 20% in 2012 and remained almost stable at its second position. Meanwhile, Germany
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a rise throughout the 3-year period to a peak of 15%, compared to India with a slight variation.

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. The contribution of
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power in these countries
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similar growths
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the period, by approximately 2% each. By comparison, US figure was up to
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12% in 2011 and then stayed
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unchanged for the remaining years, the lowest among the six nations.

Overall
, Germany produced by far the highest percentage of
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its total energy generation, and except India, the figures for the other countries rose
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the period surveyed.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013.

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