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The diagram below shows how sewage passes through a sewage treatment unit.

The diagram below shows how sewage passes through a sewage treatment unit. W889k
The sewage passes through a number of treatment procedures after it enters the sewage treatment plant. Firstly, sewage from Cronulla and Kurnell passes through screens which separate large objects or debris from the water. These screens are then transferred to tanks where the water is removed, and are taken by truck to a landfill site. Sewage that has passed through the first screen enters the grit tanks where grits, or fine particles, is removed. The grit is then taken to be dewatered and subsequently trucked to a landfill site. Meanwhile, the sewage still in treatment flows from the grit tanks to sedimentation tanks in which chemicals are added to assist the separation of sludge from waste water. The sludge is then transferred to a sludge digester. From the sedimentation tanks the waste water continues through fine screens which filter out any remaining solids. The solids are sent back to the screenings dewatering unit and also trucked to a landfill site. The treated waste water is released at Potter's Point. This completes the process of sewage treatment at Cronulla.
The sewage passes
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through
a number of
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treatment
procedures after it enters the sewage
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treatment
plant.
Firstly
, sewage from
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Cronulla
and
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Kurnell
passes
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through
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screens
which separate large objects or debris from the
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water
. These
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screens
are then transferred to
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tanks
where the
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water
is removed
, and
are taken
by truck to a landfill site. Sewage that has passed
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through
the
first
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screen
enters the grit
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tanks
where grits, or fine particles,
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is
removed. The grit is then taken to be
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dewatered
and
subsequently
trucked to a landfill site. Meanwhile, the sewage
still
in
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treatment
flows from the grit
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tanks
to sedimentation
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tanks
in which chemicals are
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added
to assist the separation of sludge from waste
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water
. The sludge is then transferred to a sludge digester. From the sedimentation
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tanks
the waste
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water
continues
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through
fine
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screens
which filter out any remaining solids. The solids are
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sent
back to the screenings
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dewatering
unit and
also
trucked to a landfill site. The treated waste
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water
is released
at Potter's Point. This completes the process of sewage
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treatment
at
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Cronulla
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how sewage passes through a sewage treatment unit.

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