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The provided chart details the amount of various types of food consumed by UK males in different age brackets.

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The provided chart details the number of various types of food consumed by UK males in different age brackets. Overall, the data shows that all calorie intakes vary in 3 age ranges with dairy, meat, and pulses being consumed the most in the 0-24, 25-49, and over 50 categories respectively. Regarding dairy products, diets of people aging below 24 years old tend to contain over 40% of this type of food. However, there is a reduction in this figure in older life periods as dairy consumption accounts for about 25% in the 25-49 bracket and around 15% in the 50+ category. Similarly, vegetables also witness a decrease by 5% per age range (from 20% in the 0-24 range to 10% in the 50+ bracket), and their amount is lower than that of dairy products in all 3 brackets. As for meat, its intake reaches the highest in the 25-49 range with exactly 50%, while its percentage in the other brackets is the same (20%). When it comes to pulses, they perform not too well in the first 2 periods as they only count towards 20% and roughly 15% in the 0-24 and 25-49 ranges consecutively. Despite this, this calorie source rises up to well above 60% in the 60+ bracket, making it the most consumed type of food of all sources in all categories in the chart.
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the number of various types of food consumed by UK males in
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Overall
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that all calorie intakes vary in 3 age
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ranges
with
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dairy
, meat, and pulses
being consumed
the most in the 0-24, 25-49, and over 50 categories
respectively
.

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dairy
products, diets of
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people
aging below 24 years
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tend to contain over 40% of this type of food.
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, there is a reduction in this figure in older life periods as
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dairy
consumption accounts for about 25% in the 25-49 bracket and around 15% in the 50+ category.
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, vegetables
also
witness a decrease by 5% per age
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range
(from 20% in the 0-24
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range
to 10% in the 50+ bracket), and their amount is lower than that of
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dairy
products in all 3 brackets.

As for meat, its intake reaches the highest in the 25-49
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range
with exactly 50%, while its percentage in the other brackets is the same (20%). When it
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comes
to pulses, they perform not too well in the
first
2 periods as they
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count towards 20% and roughly 15% in the 0-24 and 25-49
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ranges
consecutively
. Despite this, this calorie source rises up to well above 60% in the 60+ bracket, making it the most consumed type of food of all sources in all categories in the chart.
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