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The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010

The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010 KbJ0
The two maps illustrate how the ground floor of the museum changed in the years 1990-2010Overall, the ground floor underwent a number of major alterations although its two different history rooms along with museum office remained the same. In 1990, there was a large archeology gallery situated in the north-east side of the ground floor of museum which was completely redesigned for building two desperate areas intended to encourage children interaction and the display of posters instead, with the walls being fully removed to make there an open area. The entrance located in the south of the ground floor doubled in size whereas the local history room in the right side of the entrance remained almost the same. Another important changes were to the left side of the museum. Reception counter was separated from museum office and replaced close to the entrance. There was natural history room located beside the museum office, and no changes were made to those areas. In the meantime, the lift was constructed between natural history room and gift shop which was widened with the addition of Cafe. Finally, the statue was taken from the northern part of the ground floor to the center.
The two maps illustrate how the
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in the years 1990-2010Overall, the
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underwent a number of major alterations although its two
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history
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office remained the same. In 1990, there was a large archeology gallery situated in the north-east side of the
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ground
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of
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which was completely redesigned for building two desperate areas intended to encourage children interaction and the display of posters
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, with the walls being
fully
removed to
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make
there an open area. The entrance located in the south of the
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ground
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floor
doubled in size whereas the local
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history
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room
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. Reception counter
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office and replaced close to the entrance. There was natural
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history
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located beside the
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office, and no
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changes
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between natural
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and gift shop which
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to the center.
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IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010

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