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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. VkWJ
The supplied chart enumerates the ratio of residents who purchased tea and coffee in 5 metropolitan cities in Australia within the previous four weeks. Having a quick glance, it can be seen that the maximum percentage of all cities citizens was gone toward purchasing tea or coffee in a cafe store. Under 65% people of Melbourne and Hobbit went to a cafe shop for purchasing coffee or tea over last for weeks, whereas the percentile of Sydney and Brisbane was registered at around 60% and merely about 55% respectively. Interestingly, nearly a half ratio of Adelaide people who purchased coffee or tea in in a cafe. Turning into the next details, there was a minimal difference in the percentage of residence of Sydney who bought fresh and instant coffee within 4 weeks that was 44% and 46%, while near around 50% and above to two-tenth ratio of people of Melbourne who had bought instant coffee as well as fresh coffee in Brisbane. Instant coffee was bought by almost 53% individuals, on the contrary 35% of those masses who had purchased fresh coffee. People bought instant coffee in Adelaide and Hobbit with 54% and 50%, whilst the ratio of masses had bought coffee was nearly 35% and below two- fifth. Overall, it can be observed that the maximum ratio of citizens had preference to word fresh coffee over the given time phrase.
The supplied chart enumerates the
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purchased
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in 5 metropolitan cities in Australia within the previous four weeks. Having a quick glance, it can be
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that the maximum percentage of all cities citizens
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toward purchasing
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tea
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cafe
store. Under 65%
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people
of Melbourne and Hobbit went to a
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shop for purchasing
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over last for weeks, whereas the percentile of Sydney and Brisbane
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respectively
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of Adelaide
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. Turning into the
next
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details
, there was a minimal difference in the percentage of residence of Sydney
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bought
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and instant
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within 4 weeks that was 44% and 46%, while near around 50% and above to two-tenth
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of
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of Melbourne
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had
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instant
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in Brisbane. Instant
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was
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by almost 53% individuals,
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.
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in Adelaide and Hobbit with 54% and 50%, whilst the
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of masses had
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was
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of citizens had preference to word
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over the
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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