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The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. NRem
The floor plan shows us how changed a theatre between 2010 and 2012. Overall, the theatre's reconstruction focused on adding new rooms for several goals. Some of these new parts wanted to increase the incomes of the theatre. Thus, some of aimed to develop the conditions of preparing areas for performers. In 2010, when viewers entered the main room, they only have seen a small cafe. In 2012, however, people can be used a large restaurant was located side of the ticket office. In 2010, the auditorium was smaller than in 2012. An empty area before the auditorium was added to the auditorium. That is why the stage of the 2012 order is way wider than the old one. Also, showers added the side of the Stage. The 2010 variation of the theatre was thin and had less space. When we came to the 2012 variation had four more rooms. Some of the space of the dressing room added turned to coordination. Also, the admin office was transported to the side of the coordination space. Additionally, In 2010, storage was far from the Cafe but in the 2012 design of the theatre, the storage was left side the restaurant.
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theatre
between 2010 and 2012.

Overall
, the
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theatre
's reconstruction focused on adding new
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rooms
for several goals.
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Some
of these new parts wanted to increase the incomes of the
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theatre
.
Thus
,
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some
of aimed to develop the conditions of preparing areas for performers.

In 2010, when viewers entered the main
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room
, they
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only
have
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seen
a
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small
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cafe
. In 2012,
however
,
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people
can be
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used
a large restaurant
was located
side of the ticket office.
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In
2010, the auditorium was smaller than in 2012. An empty area
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before
the auditorium was
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added
to the auditorium.
That is
why the stage of the 2012 order is way wider than the
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old
one.
Also
, showers
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added
the side of the Stage.

The 2010 variation of the
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theatre
was thin and had less space.
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When
we came to the 2012 variation had four more
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rooms
.
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Some of the
space of the dressing
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room
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added
turned to coordination.
Also
, the admin office
was transported
to the side of the coordination space.
Additionally
, In 2010, storage was far from the
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Cafe
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but
in the 2012 design of the
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theatre
, the storage was
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left
side the restaurant.
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IELTS academic The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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