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The diagram below shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in the production of silk cloth

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The diagram highlights life cycle of silkworm from birth to cacoon and also several stages in the production of silk cloth. Overall, the process is cyclic in silkworm and linear for silk cloth in cyclic process there are four steps, while 5 step process in production of silk cloth. Cyclic process and linear process starts with eggs of silkworm and Silk thread respectively and linear process ending with Silk cloth. In the first stage of silkworm the process commences from the egg laid by mother worm. It takes 10 days to complete first stage. After that eggs are generated silkworm larvae. The food of silkworm larva is Mulberry leaves. After 4 to 6 weeks there is a cell outside of the Silk thread and In The Fourth Stage cocoon is produced after 3 to 8 days. In the last stage. it transforms into moth after 16 days and moth grow up and this cycle is repeated all over again. As it can be observed in the second picture, in the first stage, silk Threads are selected then they are boiled in the water. As soon as boiling is done they are sent for unwinding process. Here length of thread must be between 300 to 900. In following stage, silk Threads are twisted and dyed in Dyers. And finally waving is done and again it dyed. This process is continue till better quality of trade is made.
The diagram highlights life cycle of silkworm from birth to
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cacoon
and
also
several
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stages
in the production of
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silk
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cloth
.
Overall
, the
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process
is cyclic in silkworm and linear for
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silk
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cloth
in cyclic
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process
there are four steps, while
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5 step
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process
in production of
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silk
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cloth
. Cyclic
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process
and linear
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process
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starts
with eggs of silkworm and
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Silk
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thread
respectively
and linear
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process
ending with
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Silk
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cloth
. In the
first
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stage
of silkworm the
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process
commences from the egg laid by mother worm. It takes 10 days to complete
first
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stage
.
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After
that eggs
are generated
silkworm larvae. The food of silkworm larva is Mulberry
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leaves
. After 4 to 6 weeks there is a cell
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outside of
the
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Silk
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thread
and In The Fourth
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Stage
cocoon
is produced
after 3 to 8 days. In the last
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stage
.
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it
transforms into moth after 16 days and moth grow up and this cycle
is repeated
all over again. As it can
be observed
in the second picture, in the
first
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stage
,
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silk
Threads
are selected
then they
are boiled
in the water. As
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soon
as boiling
is done
they are
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sent
for unwinding
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process
. Here length of
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thread
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must
be
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between 300 to 900
. In following
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stage
,
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silk
Threads
are twisted
and dyed in Dyers. And
finally
waving
is done
and again it dyed. This
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process
is
Consider using a past participle here: "continued".
continue
till better quality of trade
is made
.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in the production of silk cloth

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