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The diagrams below show stages in the development of simple cooking equipment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the three different stages in the development of cooking equipment. Overall, it can be clearly seen that cooking equipment divided into three stages. Initiated with the pot and completes with advanced cooking equipment. In the first stage, there is only a pot with three stones, twigs of the wood and grass. Whereas, in the second stage stones and grass are covering with Clay shield to protect the fire and from the wind. In the final stage, there is advanced cooking pot. It is cover with metal and in the front there is door for enter the air and for removed the ash. It is also protective with Clay lining and grate for charcoal for use the fire instead of petrol. Around the pot there are three supports and two handles. With the help of handles easy to transportation the pot.
The diagram illustrates the three
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in the development of cooking equipment.

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that cooking equipment divided into three
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stages
. Initiated with the
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pot
and completes with advanced cooking equipment.

In the
first
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stage
, there is
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only
a
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pot
with three stones, twigs of the wood and grass. Whereas, in the second
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stage
stones and grass are covering with Clay shield to protect the fire and from the wind.

In the final
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stage
, there
is advanced
cooking
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pot
. It is cover with metal and in the front there is door for enter the air and for removed the ash. It is
also
protective with Clay lining and grate for charcoal for
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use
the fire
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of petrol. Around the
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pot
there are three supports and two
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handles
. With the
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of
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easy to transportation the
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show stages in the development of simple cooking equipment.

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4 paragraphs
143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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