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The Plan Show The Site Of An Airport Now And How It Will Look After Redevelopment

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The image illustrates the proposed reconstruction plan of Southwest airport next year. Overall, there will be an increasing number of facilities and gates, and there will also be rearrangement of some areas. At the moment, Southwest airport has 3 main areas, which are the departures, arrivals and the gates area. In the departures lounge, there is a check-in table on the left side, and on the opposite is a coffee shop. Passing through these 2 areas is the security passport control and at the end of the hallway is the gates area, which includes 8 gates in total and a walkway located on the left side of the airport. While in the arrival area, there is only passport control customs without any other facilities. Next year, the check-in table in the departures will be replaced with the bag drop area, while the coffee shop will be relocated right next to it, and the check-in will be moved to the place where the coffee shop is located now. The security gate remains unchanged; however, there will be shops built along the hallway. In addition, the the number of gates will increase from 8 gates to 18, split into 2 hallways and a sky train will be built in the middle of this section. In the arrivals lounge, there will be 1 more coffee shop next to an ATM, added on the right side of the airport, and there will also be a place for hiring cars, right next to the entry of the arrivals lounge.
The image illustrates the proposed reconstruction plan of Southwest
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airport
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next
year.
Overall
, there will be an increasing number of facilities and
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gates
, and there will
also
be rearrangement of
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some
areas.

At the moment, Southwest
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airport
has 3 main
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areas
, which are the departures,
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arrivals
and the
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gates
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area
. In the departures lounge, there is a
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check
-in table on the
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left
side, and on the opposite is a
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coffee
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shop
. Passing through these 2
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areas
is the security passport control and at the
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end
of the hallway is the
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gates
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area
, which includes 8
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gates
in total and a walkway located on the
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left
side of the
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airport
. While in the
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arrival
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area
, there is
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only
passport control customs without any other facilities.

Next
year, the
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check
-in table in the departures will
be replaced
with the bag drop
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area
,
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while
the
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coffee
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shop
will
be relocated
right
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next
to it, and the
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check
-in will be
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moved
to the place where the
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coffee
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shop
is located
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now
. The security
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gate
remains unchanged;
however
, there will be
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shops
built along the hallway.
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,
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the the
number of
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gates
will increase from 8
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gates
to 18, split into 2 hallways and a sky train will
be built
in the middle of this section. In the
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arrivals
lounge, there will be 1 more
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coffee
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shop
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next
to an ATM,
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added
on the right side of the
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airport
, and there will
also
be a place for hiring cars, right
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next
to the entry of the
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arrivals
lounge.
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IELTS academic The Plan Show The Site Of An Airport Now And How It Will Look After Redevelopment

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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