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Hotogth frkdi fhuduig eyidtuj jfgifo uishkj gjhddg ofsgunirri kfuihsbn jdiojvv jdok

Hotogth frkdi fhuduig eyidtuj jfgifo uishkj gjhddg ofsgunirri kfuihsbn jdiojvv jdok Nwn6q
The given line chart illustrates the pencentum of better quality river water in four nations between 1995 and 2010. It also shows the prediction for 2022. The data has calibrated in percentage. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of good quality river water in country A and country B showed a stable trend. Whereas, country C and country D showed a opposite trend with some fluctuations. To Commence with, between 1995 and 2010 the percent of good quality river water in country A slightly increase from about 96 %. However, after the percentage of good quality water started decline at reached in 2022 by 94 percent. Moreover, in year 1995 good quality of river water in Country B stood a 94 percent still 2010 and then the graph will be dramatically grow at reach nearly 97 %. Furthermore, in past period both Country C and Country D observed some fluctuations. In Country D only 85 % of river water was in good quality in 1995. It peaked at about 92 % in 2002. But again fell to 84 % in 2008. After that they were remained stable in 2010 at 86 % and future expected they will be dropped in 84 percent. Add to more, Country C was slightly dropped by 2008 about 87 % and reached a peak point will be further improvement in 96 percent in future period.
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pencentum
of better
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quality
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river
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water
in four nations between 1995 and 2010. It
also
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shows
the prediction for 2022. The data has calibrated in percentage.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that the proportion of
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good
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quality
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river
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water
in
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country
A and
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country
B
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showed
a stable trend. Whereas,
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country
C and
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country
D
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showed
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a
opposite trend with
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some
fluctuations. To Commence with, between 1995 and 2010 the
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percent
of
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good
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quality
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river
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water
in
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country
A
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slightly increase
from about 96 %.
However
, after the percentage of
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water
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started
decline at reached in 2022 by 94
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percent
.
Moreover
, in year 1995
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good
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of
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river
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in
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Country
B stood a 94
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still
2010 and then the graph will be
dramatically
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grow
at reach
nearly
97 %.
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, in past period both
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C and
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D observed
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D
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only
85 % of
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was in
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good
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quality
in 1995. It peaked at about 92 % in 2002.
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But
again fell to 84 % in 2008. After that they
were remained
stable in 2010 at 86 % and future
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expected
they will
be dropped
in 84
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percent
.
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to more,
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C was
slightly
dropped by 2008 about 87 % and reached a peak point will be
further
improvement in 96
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in future period.
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IELTS academic Hotogth frkdi fhuduig eyidtuj jfgifo uishkj gjhddg ofsgunirri kfuihsbn jdiojvv jdok

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