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The plan illustrates a map with the current layout of a university sports centre and a map of its outlook after remodeling.

The plan illustrates a map with the current layout of a university sports centre and a map of its outlook after remodeling. 7Lqw6
The plan illustrates a map with the current layout of a university sports centre and a map of its outlook after remodeling. The modulation will cluster two outdoor courts and central space into one ample rectangular space, making maximum use of the available property. The entire sports centre will be re-designed except the reception, changing room, pool, and seating area. On entry, there will be a reception in front, a sports shop to the left and a café to the right. There would be one changing room each, adjacent to the sports shop and café. The changing room on the left will lead to a leisure pool in front of it. There is a 25m pool in the center. An entrance left to the reception leads to the third changing room, from where one can enter the pool on the right. The opening on the immediate right of reception leads to the seating area. There is a sports hall adjacent to the seating area. On the extreme right of reception, followed by a left, leads to two adjoining dance studios, and a further left leads to the gym.
The plan illustrates a map with the
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layout of a university
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and a map of its outlook after remodeling.

The modulation will cluster two outdoor courts and central space into one ample rectangular space, making maximum
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use
of the available property.
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entire
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sports
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centre
will be re-designed except the
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reception
,
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changing
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room
,
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pool
, and seating area.

On entry, there will be a
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reception
in front, a
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sports
shop to the
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left
and a café to the
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right
. There would be one
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changing
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room
each, adjacent to the
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sports
shop and café. The
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changing
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room
on the
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left
will
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lead
to a leisure
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pool
in front of it. There is a
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25m
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pool
in the center. An entrance
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left
to the
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reception
leads to the third
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changing
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room
, from where one can enter the
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pool
on the
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right
. The opening on the immediate
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right
of
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reception
leads to the seating area. There is a
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sports
hall adjacent to the seating area. On the extreme
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right
of
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, followed by a
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, leads to two adjoining dance studios, and a
further
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leads to the gym.
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IELTS academic The plan illustrates a map with the current layout of a university sports centre and a map of its outlook after remodeling.

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