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He daigram shows the structure of smokery house and how to work it

He daigram shows the structure of smokery house and how to work it VYaOJ
The diagram demonstrates how a home smokery works. It is manifest from the graph that this process is devide into three stage. In this machine, mostly process are under ground level and only cooking process is on floor level. Lid is open in the first level because of natural air is enter by this lid and this air gone to the second stage of this process. In this part, lid is close on the top and fire is burning below this lid at underground level, this fire burning by using logs. This logs are adding by lid for do more burning fire with smoke. In addition to it, this smoke is pressurise by fresh air which come by first opening lid than this air gave pressure to smoke and this smoke travel in third stage by a narrow pipe for cooking in the cook box, which is situated above floor. Finally, food item cook by smoke, so, this process is known as home smokery.
The diagram demonstrates how a home
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smokery
works. It is manifest from the graph that this
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process
is
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devide
into three stage.

In this machine,
mostly
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process
are under ground
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level
and
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only
cooking
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process
is on floor
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level
.
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Lid
is open in the
first
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level
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because
of natural
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air
is enter by this
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lid
and this
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air
gone to the second stage of this
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process
. In this part,
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lid
is close on the top and fire is burning below this
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lid
at underground
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level
, this fire burning by using logs.
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This
logs are adding by
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lid
for do more burning fire with
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smoke
.
In addition
to it, this
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smoke
is
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pressurise
by fresh
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air
which
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come
by
first
opening
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lid
than this
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air
gave pressure to
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smoke
and this
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smoke
travel in third stage by a narrow pipe for cooking in the cook box, which
is situated
above floor.
Finally
, food item cook by
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smoke
,
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so
, this
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process
is known
as home
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smokery
.
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IELTS academic He daigram shows the structure of smokery house and how to work it

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164 words
5.5
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