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My dream story and the experience of Canada

My dream story and the experience of Canada kgamK

My dream is to study abroad, working on it from 2020. Due to pandemic there was an educational gap from one year however I didn't worst my time found after my Undergraduate semester. At present I have 9 months experience in a concern explored my capacity got to learn so many things in a concern. For instance manner, discipline even how to behave with our colleagues etc. . . Likewise a concern thought me outside society and moled me to act accordingly. Secondly, 2022 January I got the opportunity to fly canada and achieve my dream to study abroad, reached at 20th of January 2022 to canada studying in the Northern College Ontario, observed this new country from food to basic needs Learnt new things day by day studied my course alone with the field job. Which was more helpful to gain practical knowledge

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 things in a concern. For instance
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