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The bar graph above shows the coastline, in kilometers, held by each of five countries: Canada, Indonesia, Russia, the Philippines, and Japan.

The bar graph above shows the coastline, in kilometers, held by each of five countries: Canada, Indonesia, Russia, the Philippines, and Japan. xDpK9
The given bar chart indicates the coastline coverage of five different countries Cannada, Indonesia, Russia, the Philippines, and Japan in kilometers. It can be clearly seen that Cannada is the one having the highest number of coastline coverage and Japan with the lowest coverage. The coastline coverage of Canada is seen the highest with a distance of more than 1 million km along with around 70000 kn of coastline available for Indonesia which is the second highest and when it comes to Russia it is near to 60000km of coastline coverage which remains average. In addition to, the Philipines has a costal coverahe of 31000km whereas Japan with the lowest of all countries with a coverage of less tha 30000km. The coastal coverage of each country depend upon the country size when it comes to Cannada its coastal area is large as it's a big country and when it comes to Japan which has the least coastal area as it is comparatively smaller than Cannada.
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Cannada
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Japan
in kilometers. It can be
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Cannada
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and
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Japan
with the lowest
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. The
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of Canada is
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the highest with a distance of more than 1 million km along with around 70000 kn of
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coastline
available for Indonesia which is the second highest and when it
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comes
to Russia it is near to
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60000km
of
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which remains average.
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has a
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costal
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Japan
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30000km
. The coastal
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size when it
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its coastal area is large as it's a
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IELTS academic The bar graph above shows the coastline, in kilometers, held by each of five countries: Canada, Indonesia, Russia, the Philippines, and Japan.

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