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the place that ws build in hospital

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The map explain changes the area of City Hospital between 2007 and 2010. There are many things that changes, But The center of City Hospital in 2007 it is same in the 2010. In the East of Hospital road in the map Car park: staff and public that change to Staff car park only and the Public car park was moved to The East of Center of City Hospital it have Rind road that connected. The Roundabout was built between the Center of City Hospital and Hospital Road And City road The Bus station was moved to the east of the Hospital Road and it have road that connected to the roundabout between the Center of City Hospital and Hospital Road And City road. While there have more one Roundabout that was built at the east of the Staff car park. So there have 5 place that was built in 2010.
The map
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changes
the area of City
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Hospital
between 2007 and 2010. There are
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things that
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changes
,
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The center of City
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Hospital
in 2007 it is same in the 2010. In the East of
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Hospital
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road
in the map
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Car
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park
: staff and public that
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change
to Staff
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car
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park
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only
and the Public
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car
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park
was
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moved
to The East of Center of City
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Hospital
it
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have
Rind
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road
that connected. The Roundabout
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between the Center of City
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Hospital
and
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Hospital
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Road
And City
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road
The Bus station was
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moved
to the east of the
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Hospital
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Road
and it
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have
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road
that connected to the roundabout between the Center of City
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and
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Hospital
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Road
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road
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at the east of the Staff
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So
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in 2010.
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IELTS academic the place that ws build in hospital

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  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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