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The chart illustrates the destination of postgraduates and graduates students ,who did not have any full time work after completing their courses.These students are from the UK and they have done their studies in year 2008.

The chart illustrates the destination of postgraduates and graduates students, who did not have any full time work after completing their courses. These students are from the UK and they have done their studies in year 2008. 1omdy
The chart illustrates the destination of postgraduates and graduates students, who did not have any full time work after completing their courses. These students are from the UK and they have done their studies in year 2008. Overall, students who are having further study, are one of the highest ones in the UK graduates and postgraduates, not having any full time work after completing their college in year 2008, while students having voluntary work, are one of the lowest ones in the list. It is quite clear from the chart that, in the year 2008, students having further study(29, 665) are one of the largest ones after completing their college and do not have any full time work followed by part time work students(17, 735), students having no job(16, 235) and voluntary work students(3, 500) respectively. Whereas, in case of postgraduates, the number of students having further study(2, 725) and who are working as a part time (2, 535) after finishing their course in 2008. In addition, number of students, who are unemployed (1, 625). The students who have voluntary work(345) are one of the least ones in the chart excluding full time work after their graduation.
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates the destination of postgraduates and graduates students, who did not have any full time work after completing their courses. These students are from the UK and they have done their studies in year 2008.

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