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The piecharts showsaverage of consumptiin food in the world and in india or china in 2008

The piecharts showsaverage of consumptiin food in the world and in india or china in 2008 PMOPK
The three piecharts reveal the information of average consumed food in the world and in the two countries which was india and china in 2008. In this charts whole data celibate in ratio. In 2008, they gave more preference to processed food which was 41%. 29% vegetables and fruits was eated by world individuals. In case of animal food they eated 26% which was least than vegetables and fruits. Maximum consumption of nuts and seeds in 2008 in whole world which was only 4%. Moreover, In china, 34% processed food was consumed by china which was minimumas compared to India. In India 23% vegetables and fruits was utilized which was lowest. but n china vegetables and fruits proportion was greatest which was 32%. 15% Animal food was consumed by china but in India they gave more prefrence to animal food which was 27%. only 11% nuts and seeds was utilized by India which was least. Overall, The pie charts shows that, In world and India they more like to processed food which was highest. but nuts and seeds was consumed by world which was minimum. In case of vegetables and fruits they eated in china. which was more as compare to other nation.
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