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The chart show the price of cloth imported by EU from some countries in 2015 and 2016

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The graph depicts the cost of fabric i orted into the EU from various nations in 2015 and 2016. Overall, a glance at the chart revealed that 3 out of 7 nations showed the higher import expense in fashion after a year starting from 2015 which compare to others. Acroding to the diagram, the ratio of fabric prices imported from the EU of 3 countries Tunisia, Turkey, and Vietnam in 2016 grew stronger than 2015. Tunisia increased the most reaching the price of 25 euros per kilo in 2016. And increasing by more than 8 euros in 2015. Vietnam also has an imported fabric price of 20 euros per kilo in 2016, a slight increase compared to 2015. Out of the 3 countries, Turkey has the lowest fabric price in 2016 at over 15 euros per kilo. Meanwhile, the period saw the 4 countries India, China, Iran, and Bangladesh have the cost of cloth imported in2015 higher than 2016. Among them, 2 countries with lamont the same price of imported fabrics at more than 10 euros are India and China. In 2015, Iran was more developed than Bangladesh with a fabric import cost of 10 euros.
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into the EU from various nations in 2015 and 2016.

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, a glance at the chart revealed that 3 out of 7 nations
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the higher import expense in fashion after a year starting from 2015 which compare to others.
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from the EU of 3
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Tunisia, Turkey, and Vietnam in 2016 grew stronger than 2015. Tunisia increased the most reaching the
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of 25 euros per kilo in 2016. And increasing by more than 8 euros in 2015. Vietnam
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of 20 euros per kilo in 2016, a slight

increase compared to 2015. Out of the 3
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, Turkey has the lowest
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in 2016 at over 15 euros per kilo.

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the 4
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India, China, Iran, and Bangladesh have the cost of cloth
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in2015 higher than 2016. Among them, 2
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at more than 10 euros are India and China. In 2015, Iran was more developed than Bangladesh with a
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import cost of 10 euros.
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